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Dark Circles by Annie Abbondante

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Rated 6.54 out of 10 Statistics


Chapters: 6

Genre: Friendship / Angst

Updated: No Longer Updated

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Occasional Sexual Content

Occasional Coarse Language

Occasional Violence


Overall Rating: 6.541

Average Rating: 5 (Guests), 5.5 (Members)

Ranking: #359

Rating Count: 1 (0 Guests, 1 members)

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"All I ever really wanted were dark circles under my eyes."

All I ever really wanted were dark circles under my eyes. The thin, navy half-moons seemed so elusive and beautiful. I wanted the kind you get from being malnourished or not getting enough sleep. Models who spent nights with rock stars had them. Dancers who devoted themselves too much to their art had them. Pale girls with black hair and lip rings had them. I wanted the kind that came from within. The kind that showed that my skin was so thin that my insides were showing. That kind gets people asking questions about you.

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"An interesting start"

Rating: 6/10

This webfiction appears to be on hiatus, with no updates since September of 2010. It also is desperately in need of a "start here" link, and appears to be incomplete.

The incompleteness is frustrating, because the story appears to be building towards a point. The protagonist, a teenager who's friends with the wrong sort, mostly by accident, is likable, her problems are accessible,…Read More


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