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Dark Circles by Annie Abbondante

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Rated 6.53 out of 10 Statistics

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Chapters: 6

Genre: Friendship / Angst

Updated: No Longer Updated

Content Advisory

Occasional Sexual Content

Occasional Coarse Language

Occasional Violence

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Overall Rating: 6.531

Average Rating: 5 (Guests), 5.5 (Members)

Ranking: #359

Rating Count: 1 (0 Guests, 1 members)

1 indicates a weighted rating.

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"An interesting start"

This webfiction appears to be on hiatus, with no updates since September of 2010. It also is desperately in need of a "start here" link, and appears to be incomplete.

The incompleteness is frustrating, because the story appears to be building towards a point. The protagonist, a teenager who's friends with the wrong sort, mostly by accident, is likable, her problems are accessible, and the story seems to be going down a normal-teenaged-live cliff.

I want to watch her recover from the cliff. I want to know everything is going to turn out okay, because the narrator is so easy to attach to.

Parts of the story are clumsy, the tropes very common - but those tropes exist for a reason, and high school is full of common, painful mistakes. I'd like to see this story continued.

Rating: 6 / 10

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