Dark Circles by Annie Abbondante

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"An interesting start"

This webfiction appears to be on hiatus, with no updates since September of 2010. It also is desperately in need of a "start here" link, and appears to be incomplete.

The incompleteness is frustrating, because the story appears to be building towards a point. The protagonist, a teenager who's friends with the wrong sort, mostly by accident, is likable, her problems are accessible, and the story seems to be going down a normal-teenaged-live cliff.

I want to watch her recover from the cliff. I want to know everything is going to turn out okay, because the narrator is so easy to attach to.

Parts of the story are clumsy, the tropes very common - but those tropes exist for a reason, and high school is full of common, painful mistakes. I'd like to see this story continued.

Rating: 6 / 10